Wrote a new blues song

[hudsonvalley]

I been neglected on a regular basis
I'm right at home feelin blue.
I'm so used to disapproving faces
That, baby, I am comfterbul with you

So, honey, I'm home
Tell me every little thing I done wrong.
And tell me again why I'm lucky to have you.

You know my boss is always glad to see me
Because he can't kick his dog no mo.
And then I come home and try to watch the TV
But all you wanna give me is what fo.

So, honey, I'm home
Tell me every little thing I done wrong.
And tell me again why I'm lucky to have you.

I been neglected on a regular basis
I been neglected on a regular basis
I been neglected on a regular basis, it's true.

Then she says:
You been hangin' out the usual places
While I been home a-mind' the store.
I ain't about to be your oasis.
You ain't the only one who wants more.

Big deal, you came home.
Do I need company to feel alone?
Now tell me again why I'm so lucky to have you.

I been neglected on a regular basis
I been neglected on a regular basis
I been neglected on a regular basis, it's true.

 

[Infinity]

Classic!

I enjoyed that...thanks!

Brian

 

[nicktressler]

This song really hits home with some stuff I have going on right now. I love the blues.

 

[NorCalCigarLover]

cool ....... send me the mp3

 

[anvil]

That was cool mate

 

[MX]

He is a poet, and didn't even know it...you could tell by his Longfellow....

But really that was great, is there an MP3?

 

[Saxjazzman]

Sounds good!!

 

[hudsonvalley]

cool ....... send me the mp3

Soon, it is only in the air so far. Recording project in progress

 

[NorCalCigarLover]

cool ....... send me the mp3

Soon, it is only in the air so far. Recording project in progress

Hmmmmm ..... this could our next iPass


:sign:

 

[hudsonvalley]

Those cowboys with wide open spaces
May have a point after all
I'd rather wander those desolate mesas
Than open that door down the hall.

 

[Bargogirl]

Pretty cool. I too, would like to hear it. Music is a passion in our household!