Need you opinion / criticism

[DaveWF]

I've recently finished putting together a tri-fold brochure for my business, DWF Computers and am looking for praise, criticism, advise, whatever....
Let me know what you all think!

DWF Computers Tri-Fold Brochure
BTW, it's in Adobe Acrobat format (PDF file)
Thanks!

 

[benjiev]

Dave
Looks good to me. It's clean, well thought out and I like the graphics you used.

just one question who's the mug in the photo .................

LMAO

BenjieV

 

[Shadow]

Dave, looks great bro! :thumbs:

Just one thing you ought to add...................................





















THE MONKEY PICTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sign: :sign: :sign:

 

[gr8full2day]

No bad for a 'puter nerd....LMAO...I was thinking your were certifiable!....with the "monkey pic" and all.... :sign: :sign:

 

[ParaGod]

Nice and professional

 

[Captain B]

Very professional. Quick to read - nice format. Good luck!

 

[JOE.M.]

where's the cheeky monkey? ???

 

[SamGuss]

Good job Dave. As someone who loves designing things like this I was pretty impressed with the overall professional - but not "dry" look of it.

Way to go!

Sam

 

[DaveWF]

Thanks for your compliments everyone, but NO the monkey picture is NOT going in there.

Other then that, is there anything you folks think should be added/removed. Remember, I love praise, but I'm looking for ways to improve this as well.

Dave

Oh yeah, in case anyone is interested.... I did it all with one of the basic templates (highly modified in the end) in Microsoft Publisher and then dropped it into Adobe for the PDF format.

 

[TheBeast]

Other then that, is there anything you folks think should be added/removed.

Well, I believe you could probably remove your slogan " Your personal computer nerd..." After all you have that picture of yourself...that pretty much covers the "nerd" part. LMAO

:sign: JK

 

[Snakeeyezzes]

Looking Good Dave

 

[sir-smokes-a-lot]

Looks great the way it is.

 

[bigdan1173]

Hey Dave,

Do you do any website design????

I could use some help.

Thanks,

Dan

 

[Lee]

Well done Dave! I wish you success with your company! One of my ham radio buddies here in Richmond did the same type deal. He started off slow but has built up a pretty decent customer base, even some commercial customers.

Good Luck!

I like the nerd part! LMAO

 

[ASU Bug]

It looks good. Clean, understandable, and informative. How long have you been in business?

 

[jgriddle]

Looks very good Dave. I Wish you all the luck in the world Brother.
Later
Jerry